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By Renen H.
Modern Cinqain


Amazing Brave
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DANGEROUS ARCHITECTURE
A couple months ago, I had built a huge ceiling scraper out of Girder and Panel. Girder and Panel is a building set using plastic pieces, you use it just like real, steel Girder. So anyway, I had this six foot tall tower. I let my hamster, Asheghmoneighonym, (just call him ash) play in the tower, going up and down the ramps that were serving as stairs that lead up to the higher floors. He eventually went up all of the ramps and got up to the roof that I had built like an observation deck. I had thought it was so amazing that had gotten all of the way up there with out giving up and going back down, so I gave him a treat. He inspected it for a while, then, pushed it over the side of the building. Soon he followed. I thought he fell the dang six feet on accident, so I put him back up on the top. He pushed the treat down first, then he catapulted to the floor. He seemed to like sky-diving, so he fell to the ground again and again. For a while he would jump off of everything. I tell you I don't think the animal is going to live much longer.



Renen Hicken



Ash isn't the only odd one, to prove that, I have stolen some top secret information on other pets members in my family used to own.

A long time ago, it was a dark and stormy night, just like most were in califorrnia at that time, and mother was sleeping in her bed. A noise disturbed her sleep. It sounded like a knife at the wall. She took a look out her window and saw... (drumroll please) ...her cat. She let out a screem, and let the cat in through the window. The black cat crawled down to the foot of her bed under the covers. The black cat cursed her, and now every night, he comes back, to attack any feet that move near it.


That extreemly dramatized story is true, and was told to me by a witness.
Fatherman used to have a dog. The only flaw was that the dawg lived a xcouple thousand miles away, on his uncle's farm. He would visit the dog a lot. The odd part of this one is that the rascal would chew up baby trees. How odd. The dog died by drowning in a creek. Scientists say that it was suicidal.

That extreemly exagerated story is true, and was told to me by a witness.



































































Ash is the Best
Do you love your pet? I LOVE mine. He helps me, and is funny, and attracted to humans. Ash is the BEST. He is observant, helpfull, playfull, and loves people!


Ash has a strong attachment to humans. There is just an air about him, and you know he loves you. I have gathered and created quotes to back this up, and to help you understand why animals are attatched to us.
“In some cases, even death isn’t enough to break a strong bond. A dog in Scotland sat by his master’s grave for years waiting for him to come back. He died waiting.When cats bring home a dead animal as a token of love, it’s a sign of attachment and bonding. A cat may also follow you around if you have a strong bond. Maybe not immediately, but they’ll saunter into the room after a few minutes. They might also become slightly depressed when you leave, and greet you enthusiastically when you return. Also, cats may learn to recognize the sound of your car pulling up or your footsteps. Well, our pets may not be able to talk to us or hold our hand, but it’s not a stretch to describe what they feel for us as LOVE.”
~ John Tish
“Sometimes you are cuddling your hamster, rabbit, or gerbil, and they will spit food all over you. This is a sign of affection. Rodents have a way of sensing hunger and other physical feelings people have. When they sense hunger in you, they will spit out food to satisfy it.”
~Lolly Cochran

Ash is observant. I wrote a personal narrative to back it up.
A short, short time ago, in a place, not so far away, I was cleaning my room. And Ash was watching me. Eventually, I finished. A day or two later, my room was messy again. That day I let Ash out of his cage, and he ran all over the room. Then, I left him like that for a few minutes while I left the room. When I came back to my now CLEAN room, I found Ash sitting in the middle of the room, with all the small toys in the room where they go. He had been watching me for a while, and had remembered where the toys went, and he put them away! Wow!

Ash is kind. He can understand my feelings. I have written about something that is part of my life every day to back this up.
A lot of the time, I come home from school, sad, or upset, and I'll let Ash run around the room while I just lie on the floor. After a minute, he'll read my mood and come over to me, and cuddle and try to cheer me up.
A long time ago, friend said she missed her cat. When I asked her why, she said, “it could read my mind. He'd want to play when I'm happy, let me hold him when I'm sad, and he'd run away when I'm mad.”


I hope that Ash will continue to be the best hamster, just like he is now. Because if he doesn't, then I won't be able to brag about it anymore, he wouldn't play with people anymore, and he wouldn't comfort me and my brother anymore. I realize that when I play with him, or watch him, I feel like he really is the best. Because he always makes it fun for everyone around him.
In my oppinion, a good substitute is many things. They shouldn't be strict. Some subs I've had say they love to goof off with us, and it's okay to make mistakes, but they send you to the office at the smallest joke, take away you're recess at the tiniest laugh, and a mistake is worth a good yell. A good substitute shouldn't have harsh punishments. Some subs I've had will take you in for recess, and not even do you're work. You can't read, write, do make up work, nothing. You just have to sit there. A good sub has to be smart. I like my subs to know why our teacher is gone, to kknow what we have to learn (and teach it to us), and they have to know their way around the school. A sub has to stay on topic. I've had subs that don't stay on topic, and in the middle of a lesson, they will start raving aabout something that has nothing to do with the lesson, or even school. One sub I've had in Maxey Math didn't teach us anything at all. She told us how her family was rich in the midevil times, and still owns a castle, and showed us her family crest. She said it was something “cool” to know. When Mrs. Maxey came back, she was mad at us because the sub gave her a bad report, and how we didn't do any work. A good sub should be fun to be with. They should like to goof around, (maybe just a little), they should tell jokes, make learning humourous, and have a good sense of humor. They should inforse the rules, like the keys to success, and give rewards for good behavior. I'm sure that if you put all of these together, you'll get a god substitute, and happy kids.











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